Evaluation Screening and Feedback : The Awakening

"Well edited, good music, good effects. But a bit too bassy at the start" 7.5/10

"Music is very good, edited together well, good gore and start drawn on floor. Tidy up the music at the very end" 8/10

"The effect of the star being drawn really worked. The montage of shots works well. You cant really hear what is being said" 6.5/10

"The use of gore was good. The choice of music made it a lot more scary. Use of close-ups when holding hands and speaking. Although Camera could be stiller" 9/10

"Close-ups of face and hands and the bloody smile at the end, circle being drawn. Can see Bex smiling though" 6/10

"The tension throughout wit hthe camera shots and close-ups was good. The music was spooky which created suspense. But gives away most of the narrative in a 2 minute trailer" 7/10

"Good soundtrack, clever effect of chalk drawing on the floor, good shots - cinematography, bass. But blonde girl is bad at acting." 7.5/10

"Good location, creepy music, good pentagram effect, good body horror. But a bit slow paced in parts." 7.5/10

"Good killing scene with pole, the animation of star, good location and camera angles. But the background music was annoying." 5/10

"Editing was good especially the drawing on the floor. Good use of close-ups. Sounds throughout were good and created suspense. The shots of the the pole going in to the mouth were a bit slow" 6/10

"Good location, effect on the pentagram is good, good camera angles. Still hard to know what is going on." 6.5/10

Average score: 7.5/10